文/刘宝彩/天津
先看本文作者写作以下英语作文
Good morning/afternoon !
I am ____ , from ____ High school, ____ District, TIANJIN. And I am pleased to be here and talk to you about such a topic as color of the world. I find it good to keep the color of the world green. This tells you that my favorite color is green.
It remains friendly environment. This helps people with more trees and grass. They need to be planted year by year, turning green in Spring. For this, I should learn how to take care of flowers by growing them. They let people know that the world looks green.
This sounds interesting to people. That gets nice of them to do some sporting in the world. It helps have physical and mental health enjoyed by people who feel happy to live a life.
This enables them to be full of the great hope for bright future. How importantly the color of the world becomes green! This keeps our world beautiful, in my view.
Thank you !
上述英语作文可以看出：这篇英语演讲，也是一篇英语逻辑写作作文，既可以当作读后续写也可当作特定主题的英语作文。
总结：
上述英语作文是按照“原因←提示观点→结果”思路而写作英语作文的，因此以提示观点为中心，左找原因，右找结果。这样让演讲者或写作者便“有词儿说或写，有词儿知道怎么说或怎么写”，达到意思不重复，英文语言表达有新鲜感，评委或大考判卷老师对此有吸引力给高分数！
当然，没有模板“痕迹”，判卷老师不扣分，而是给考生升档次加分数是毫无疑问的。认为这篇英语作文被视为读后续写也可当作特定主题的大考写作英语作文，本文作者期待着所写的这篇英语作文对考生有所帮助；也希望给考生修改或写作以其他特定为题的英语作文，都可以提供帮助。
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